Sunset Limited: The Poem

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NativeSon5859

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Well, I've always liked to write poems, so I thought it'd be appropriate to write one on the Sunset. I hope you all enjoy, I am considering whether or not to send it to Amtrak...after sprucing it up of course. :)

Let me know what you think!

Sunset limited

Ridin the rails for over 100 years.

What a feat, some will say.

A 2500 mile journey.

I wouldn’t have it any other way.

Seeing the true America,

One that’s both grand and not.

One could call it a service.

But the people seem to have forgot.

Oh I’ve been through it all.

Robberies, wrecks, and vandals on my tracks.

But I’ve always survived.

Always finding a way.

Always finding a way to ride another day.

Down to three days a week now.

Work is not as frequent as it used to be.

But now I see Florida,

Which is just fine by me.

The gulf coast.

Bayou country.

The magnificent Southwest.

Think a plane can show you this much?

Ha, put that to the test!

They call me a sunbelt superliner.

Comfort and service are what I do best.

You buy the ticket and have a seat.

Let me do all the rest.

But even though I still ply the routes

Like my ancestors of yore,

I may have to experience something

I’ve never experienced before.

This old man may be put out to pasture.

And no one seems to care.

And for all this time I truly thought

I would never go anywhere.

People hate me because I’m often late.

It was never my intention to make them so irate.

I do my best to get them there on time.

But to some people lateness might as well be a crime.

Oh I would miss the California sun…

And the Louisiana rain…

I would miss the bridge they call Huey P…

Don’t let it go down the drain!

So let me serve you while I can.

I still have life in me yet!

Experience this country the way I do.

Ride the train called Sunset!
 
Well done! (to the sounds of much applause). Thanks for sharing that with us!

Now, if you could just set it to music . . . . . . I'm only kidding!!!
 
I like this poem so much that I just read it again (and usually I hate poetry, to be honest) and it really is marvelous. I would strongly suggest sending it to Amtrak: maybe they can print it and put it up as a poster in all the stations the Sunset Limited serves, even the ones that don't have a staffed station. It might convince passengers that the late train is worth waiting for. :)
 
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